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Entanglement Mods ([personal profile] the_measurers) wrote2010-04-14 10:55 pm
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Application

Entanglement has switched over to a dressing room format for now, so applications aren't needed for the time being.

FANDOM CHARACTER APPLICATION:




ORIGINAL CHARACTER APPLICATION:



Whichever application you're posting, please put the character's name, if they're an OC, and their fandom (if any) in the subject line.

Note again that you are allowed to use musebox posts and posts on [livejournal.com profile] testrun_box for your sample. In that case, your total amount of tags written will be added up, so the initial post can be shorter than normal for a sample. You're still required to use a prose format and set the sample in the game universe though.
questionablewit: (raised eyebrow)

Re: Hawke II Dragon Age 2 (2/2)

[personal profile] questionablewit 2011-06-28 11:33 am (UTC)(link)

Sample:

The one thing Hawke can't get used to about living on a space station is...well, space. She's had the concept explained to her, and can grasp the idea that her home was probably another "planet" like the ones described to her, floating in the formlessness of this "space." But to her it's the Void made manifest, and she just hates it. The Void is something for facing after death, if you're not fit to sit by the side of the Maker. It has no business existing in life.

She pushes the thought aside and returns to the task at hand. "This is a knife?" she mutters. "It doesn't look like it would cut butter." She holds it up, skeptical. To her, knives are made of metal. Shiny, sharp, tangible. This is a handle with a button. True, when she presses the button some sort of magical light appears, a good nine inches long and flickering with menace, but still...light? How can light cut anything?

The merchant, clearly thinking she's making an attempt to haggle rather than expressing genuine confusion, pulls an apple from behind the counter and swiftly cuts it into pieces. Hawke raises an eyebrow, impressed; the light-blade had cut through the apple as though it weren't even there. No friction. Hmm. If it could cut through other things like that... The weight--or rather, the lack of it--will take some getting used to. She wouldn't want to use it in a proper fight. But she can already see a number of uses. Her new home is made of strange materials she doesn't even know the names of yet, and it's clear ordinary steel will only go so far. "I'll take it."
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Re: ALSO

[personal profile] questionablewit 2011-06-29 09:15 am (UTC)(link)
Will do all this. =) Going to put an entry in Hawke's journal with details plus a link to it from her profile, if that's all right. Thanks and see you in the comm!