After reviewing your application we'd like to ask for some revisions.
1: The personality section is too short. Please add at least six lines of personality.
2: Please elaborate on her magedom: how does it work, what fuels it, what spells does she know, for instance.
3: Samples need to be set in the game universe. Please have a sample set somewhere within the game's universe.
4: Upon consulting with the other mods, we've decided that the gates are not generally found on a planet's surface. Please choose an alternate method of arrival for her. Sorry if there was confusion!
There's no need to alter any part of the application besides those. Thank you and we hope to see a revised application from you soon.
REVISIONS
1: The personality section is too short. Please add at least six lines of personality.
2: Please elaborate on her magedom: how does it work, what fuels it, what spells does she know, for instance.
3: Samples need to be set in the game universe. Please have a sample set somewhere within the game's universe.
4: Upon consulting with the other mods, we've decided that the gates are not generally found on a planet's surface. Please choose an alternate method of arrival for her. Sorry if there was confusion!
There's no need to alter any part of the application besides those. Thank you and we hope to see a revised application from you soon.