We felt your application was overall very good. However we'd like to ask for one small revision and have one question for you before we can accept it.

1: Quite a bit of your character's personality actually falls under character backstory. This is largely our oversight as mods for forgetting to include a separate history section for OCs and we apologize. Nevertheless we'd like to ask for an additional couple lines of personality. You can post that as another comment.

2: Does the sample take place in Entanglement's setting?