http://kevanick.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kevanick.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] the_measurers 2011-05-09 01:38 am (UTC)

Re: Chris Ramirez

Abilities and Skills:
With his Advent Deck he can transform into Kamen Rider Sting by holding it outward and saying 'Kamen Rider'. All Kamen Riders have what is called an Advent Deck and is their source of power for all Kamen Riders. Each Rider has their own Advent Beast in their deck which can give them additional power. Chris' particular Beast is a maroon manta ray-like creature by the name of Evildiver. While he doesn't have flight or super strength, as a Kamen Rider he has enhanced speed, durability and strength compareable to a major athlete. It's nothing too far outside the range of normal human though. In addition to his own strength as a Kamen Rider, his cards in his Advent Deck can help him in situations. The ones his uses most often are: Swing Vent which gives him a whip, Copy Vent which replicates or copies an opponent's weapon, Attack Vent which has Evildiver attack the opponent and Final Vent which he jumps onto Evildiver to use like a surfboard, and rams into his opponent. I don't see a major problem with nerfing his power as he's one of the weaker Riders, he wouldn't be able to deal with too many physical blows before reverting to his human form.

Sample:

A hum was heard through Chris' lips as he slowly awakened on what he assumed was a bed. He wasn't sure how long he had been asleep or when, what he did recall was eating pizza with Len and Kit. Eating and then... Kit had relayed
his tale of how close he was with his father, something Chris wished he had with his own father. He must've left the apartment but then how did he find himself asleep? Did Strike and Xaviax attack him when his back was turned? Is that why Len and Kit were letting him rest? As he slowly rised and opened his eyes, he called out to his friends.

"Kit? Len, are you guys here?" Not yet realizing that they were no longer with him, he tripped outside the 'bed' and that woke him up with a jolt. He looked up to see a large pod of sorts which he had apparently stumbled and fell out of. Backing away in shock, he quickly checked his pockets to make sure his Advent Deck was still with him. Fortunately, it was. "What happened? How did I get here?" Chris wondered outloud. This was very strange. His thoughts did now drift to his friends: Kit, Maya, and Len. What happened to them? Why aren't they here with him? What was going on?

Chris quickly searched for anyone else in the room, hopefully someone could answer his questions... But unfortunately he found no one. "All right." Chris said with a sigh. "First step: find other people and see if I can find out what's going on this very strange place. And hopefully... Kit and the others are okay." Kamen Rider or not, he couldn't just stay here, wherever 'here' was. Information was the first step, and seeing if there's a way back is the next one. Chris knew that he was need back home. he couldn't stay in this place. With a nod he scooped up his fallen Advent Deck and checked the pod. The only thing in it was his dog tags. Chris picked them up carefully, and left the room cautiously. This wouldn't be easy.

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