While overall we enjoyed your application, we'd like to ask for the following modifications:
1: We'd feel much better if you decided your character's method of arrival. Flip a coin if you want, but the decision should come from you.
2: We'd like a couple more details in the appearance section: Hair color? Eye color? Build? Typical expression?
3: The sample is of the wrong type. Please resubmit a prose sample (IE with a narrator, either in first or third person, describing something happening). We don't require a sample for the network or other forms of IC communication.
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REVISIONS
1: We'd feel much better if you decided your character's method of arrival. Flip a coin if you want, but the decision should come from you.
2: We'd like a couple more details in the appearance section: Hair color? Eye color? Build? Typical expression?
3: The sample is of the wrong type. Please resubmit a prose sample (IE with a narrator, either in first or third person, describing something happening). We don't require a sample for the network or other forms of IC communication.
You can edit your comments or reply directly here.
Thank you.