Hello Rogue! Your application looks pretty good, but we here at Entanglement Corp (c) would like a little bit more detail on the assassin skillset-- maybe talk about the training he received? Furthermore, we would enjoy just slightly more from your Personality section, which, while tasty, would taste better with a little seasoning on the top. That was not a proper metaphor, but the point is that we could dig some extra exposition in there. Once that happens? Good as gold.
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Your application looks pretty good, but we here at Entanglement Corp (c) would like a little bit more detail on the assassin skillset-- maybe talk about the training he received? Furthermore, we would enjoy just slightly more from your Personality section, which, while tasty, would taste better with a little seasoning on the top. That was not a proper metaphor, but the point is that we could dig some extra exposition in there. Once that happens? Good as gold.
Your friends,
Entanglement Mods